tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36634328954477944682024-03-13T10:16:55.686-07:00Lilac SlacksLilac Slackshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03584347628947916900noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3663432895447794468.post-43842847842034215912016-10-17T13:07:00.000-07:002016-10-21T15:14:36.251-07:00Authentic Discussions<div dir="ltr" style="line-height: 1.2; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-top: 0pt; text-align: center;">
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<span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "arial"; font-size: 14.666666666666666px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">When you are the first one to walk into a classroom in the morning, you get the same feeling you get when you are alone on a beach. This is a public space, yet right now, yours. This place, familiar, timeless, and divine is a force, and it imposes serenity when it has your attention. This morning, with autumnal tree leaves rustling outside the windows, my classroom was an ‘alone on the beach’ space, and I decided to just </span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "arial"; font-size: 14.666666666666666px; font-style: italic; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">be</span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "arial"; font-size: 14.666666666666666px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"> and </span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "arial"; font-size: 14.666666666666666px; font-style: italic; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">observe</span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: black; font-family: "arial"; font-size: 14.666666666666666px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">. In this Zen state, I was watching the slow then swift, kind of seagull like entrance of my students. </span></div>
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<b style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: black; font-family: "arial"; font-size: 14.6667px; font-weight: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Here was my new challenge: Students engaging in authentic discussions </span><span style="color: black; font-family: "arial"; font-size: 14.6667px; font-style: italic; font-weight: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">around the content under study</span><span style="color: black; font-family: "arial"; font-size: 14.6667px; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"><span style="font-weight: normal;">. Imagine a stone skipping across water. To get a good skip, the skipper has to get the right rock and tossing technique, and then let the stone fly. Accordingly, a teacher with the right content and process can achieve a great discussion. One launch of the stone, brings about two distinct ripples in the surface of the classroom, student driven learning and authentic discussions. The first ripple (</span><b style="font-weight: normal;">2b</b><span style="font-weight: normal;">) is the student ownership piece. A teacher has to set a culture in which students assume responsibility for high-quality work. This opens up the space for the second ripple (</span>3b<span style="font-weight: normal;">), the discussion.</span></span></b><br />
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<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #202020; font-family: "arial"; font-size: 14.666666666666666px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">We teachers everywhere have been given a gift, and that gift is named Amy Ellifritz. Amy devoted her 15-16 school year to mastering Socratic Seminar and authentic classroom discussions, and she documented her journey for the betterment of the rest of us. Amy made a series of four videos, which, along with supporting documents, guide you through implementing Socratic Seminar in your classroom. The videos tell the story of Amy’s journey from novice to expert, and her students’ development into thoughtful participants in authentic conversations around content. Presented on the Knowledge Center, they are all you need to fully embed authentic conversations into your classroom routine. Visit “Step by Step Socratic Seminar” on the Knowledge Center, and you will be inspired</span><span style="background-color: transparent; color: #202020; font-family: "arial"; font-size: 14.666666666666666px; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">. </span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">We took the kids to see
Godzilla today.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>They loved it, mostly
because they got to see a movie rated PG13 (they’re 8, nephew is 9).<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Judging
by our many trips to the lobby, they really weren’t so much engaged with what
was on the screen, as with the entire theater experience, which is good,
because I regret their seeing Godzilla.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">
</span>When my daughter leaned over and said the words “<i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">good that he killed all those babies!”</i> I started thinking and still
can’t stop thinking about the movie that inspired that sentence. <span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">The basic plot is that
supposedly there was an earthquake near a Japanese nuclear power plant
(Janjira, the only power company evoked at all in the movie, and it is defunct about
10 minutes in), which triggered a meltdown and quarantine of the area.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>One surviving scientist can’t get over it,
and he pursues his theory that it was not a natural disaster but something
else.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Turns out he was right.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>It was an electro-magnetic pulse (EMP) from
something alive.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The pulse is repeating
and getting stronger, so a repeat of the earthquake event is imminent. The
ultimate EMP disrupts power.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>All
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Joe, the aged scientist and
a Japanese scientist named Serizawa discover that a massive unidentified terrestrial
organism (MUTO) is awakening, it eats nuclear power <i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">and</i> waste, is hungry, and also is trying to signal a mate.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The MUTO emerges, Godzilla follows him.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The MUTOs search for more nuclear meals and
his mate take him and Godzilla through Hawaii and towards Nevada.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Joe dies and his grown son takes over in the
role of scientist who understands what is happening and how to stop it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>So, these MUTOs are after our nuclear power
and waste, and they are Godzilla’s prey.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">
</span>At this point, my daughter pointed out that the female had babies in her
belly, which was uncomfortable for me.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">
</span>Wait, what?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>A pregnant female is
the biggest menace in the movie? Cue heightened awareness and now mama is
watching for subtext.<o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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attack the MUTOs with nuclear warheads, which doesn’t work several times, since
the MUTOs just eat them.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The Japanese
scientist, Serizawa, notifies everyone that Godzilla is hunting the MUTOs and
will restore balance to the earth if just allowed to follow through.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The military hesitates a little too long to
adopt this philosophy, attacking good Godzilla for a good while.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The lady MUTO lays her eggs underground, but
the military, led by Joe’s son, firebombs them and burns them up.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Godzilla first kills the male MUTO and then
the female.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Godzilla is knocked out for
a while and then gets up and returns to the sea. <o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">My most immediate concern
is that no person, no American is being attacked or threatened.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>These <i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">unidentified
terrestrial organisms</i> (just to see what happens, I’m leaving out <i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">massive</i>) are just hungry.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>They happen to eat nuclear power and waste,
and it just so happens that US power companies have lots of that, so they are
coming for it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Since Godzilla has historically
worked as an extended metaphor for fears, is it logical to see this as a
metaphor for America’s xenophobic attitudes around immigration?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Yes, especially since the biggest menace,
being a pregnant female, has laid her eggs on U.S. soil.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Luckily/sadly, as my sweet, innocent daughter
pointed out, all the babies have been killed so we won’t face a “dreamer”
dilemma around those MUTO babies in the future.<o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Now, to the unbearable
memory of having to look at the profiles of my son and nephew as the glow of
scene after scene of beautiful, godlike soldiers doing cool looking military
things washed over them and they, unprotected, absorbed the cell changing rays
that said; <i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">you could be a soldier!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></i>Being a soldier is cool, if they are
saving and protecting people.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>But in
Godzilla<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>they are not protecting
people.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>People are not being attacked at
all.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The soldiers are protecting the
interests of power companies (unless, in this movie utilities have been
nationalized; there is no evidence either way). Nuclear power is sort of
conflated with the U.S. in general in Godzilla, so we are supposed to just
think of it as “ours” I guess.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Are we
not to question the use of the lives of our most precious young people to defend
nuclear power? Dying in battle is sold to little boys as the greatest thing you
could do.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The troubling thing here is
that the enely does not pose a direct threat to people.<o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Never is the existence of
nuclear power questioned or alternatives posed and I guess that is okay, this
is a Godzilla movie after all, and nuclear power is essential to the
story.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>So, this would be okay, but the
movie goes just one step outside the realm of remaining neutral about our
nuclear situation.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>One scientist, I
can’t remember which (Sally Hawkins?) lectures during the movie and tells us
that radiation loving Godzilla is a vestige of life long ago, when the earth
was very radioactive, much more so than it is today, suggesting that radiation
is natural.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>This is a convenient truth,
right?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Maybe so, maybe when the planet
was young it was radioactive, but the threat that radioactivity poses today <i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">is not the same thing</i>.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Today, nuclear threats exist due to military
paranoia, corporate greed, and the deregulation craze we are currently enduring.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>It is definitely not natural, and we could
take steps to minimize and eventually eliminate it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>That little blurring of the line, suggesting
that this all is just the way that the earth is, is the tactic of climate
change deniers.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>It is just slipped in
there to plant in our minds the idea that nuclear power is natural, just like
climate change.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Human activity has had
nothing to do with it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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the many children separated from their parents in the movie.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>First, the young scientist’s son is separated
from mom and dad during the nuclear plant crisis in 1999.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Next the protagonist’s young son is separated
from his parents for much of the movie.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">
</span>We also see a young boy separated from mom and dad on the train in San
Francisco, and in Hawaii a little girl and her father are separated from the
mother during the tsunami.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>As
manipulative and political as this movie is, this cannot be an accidental
element.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>American families get used to
the idea; you will suffer for the causes of and convenience of the powers that
be.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Finally, just so you know
America, the worst thing that could happen is a power outage.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The EMPs disrupt all power, even
batteries.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The film maximizes the
effect.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Over and over, we see the
progression of lights going out and hear the powering down chunk chunk and
silence that accompanies a total power outage.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">
</span>The panicked faces, the screaming and running hordes, the paralyzed
traffic, it is overwhelming and horrifying, and it inspires the soldiers to
give their all.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>These episodes function
as mini-crises throughout the movie.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">
</span>Like so many other contrived situations in Godzilla, this is a
manipulation, because I can think of worse things than power outages; for
instance, another Fukushima style nuclear incident or a nuclear or any other
type of bomb. <o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">I shouldn’t have brought
such young kids to a PG – 13 movie, so I take full responsibility.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>I just thought, well its Godzilla, it’ll be
fun and how much damage can it do?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Turns
out, it did a lot of damage.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The
vilification of women and foreigners, the normalization of nuclear power, the
sneak recruitment of bomb fodder, the lowering of expectations for quality of
life, and all for what?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>So that we
accept, even become grateful for a world full of nuclear power and perpetually
engaged in war to defend our sources of it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">
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<span style="font-size: 12pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">In the wake of the
experience, I take comfort in three things: First, my kids, like so many out
there are critical thinkers who will be able to read this movie for its subtext
and analyze the heck out of it, when they are older and engaged in film
study.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Second teachers have embraced
Common Core and will churn out careful readers and writers who will critique
and create all kinds of exciting films in the coming years.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>We are in an educational renaissance that is
real and exciting.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>Third, I realize that
as usual, I may have over-reacted, as the discussion in the back seat on the
way home was; <i style="mso-bidi-font-style: normal;">who would win, Godzilla or
King Kong?</i><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>The twins’ dad chimed in with
“Historically, King Kong wins that fight.”<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">
</span>I didn’t know, and wouldn’t have guessed that that was the answer, or
that sweet Rick knew it.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>But I’m
comforted by the old school little kid perspective and apparently genuine
deflection of subtext.<o:p></o:p></span></span></div>
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